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🕑 Added 2020-01-06 11:12:52 +0000 UTCWell, should have run the spellchecker, two obvious typos in panel four- "cynical" and "apprentice". I feel like some of this dialog needs a little work, any thoughts welcome.
Was the transition from the last page too abrupt? I get that critique often. There's always a line between dragging something out too long, and moving from one scene as soon as you need to switch.
What I'm trying to do here is fill out what happened behind the scenes during the comic so far, so that when we get back to the present, I don't need to keep reexplaining things.
