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🕑 Added 2020-03-22 06:13:22 +0000 UTCOne more new page, then something like these will appear mid-week, before the new page set in the present (with Thomas and Connor deciding who to de-petrify).
Considering these are just copy and paste old pages, it didn't seem like there was any reason to not just show this to all tiers and get some feedback.
Any thoughts on this? I know it needs cleaned up in places. I had four pages left in the current twelve page chapter, so I tried to keep the recap to four pages. I had to cut out a lot of stuff, like it doesn't show the other six girls with suits, it doesn't really include the setup for most of the sleepwalker arc or fight, it doesn't show that the Silver Dragon put something inside Annie's suit... and maybe something else.
Does this work as four pages, or should I try to make it longer? I feel like this is the minimum number of pages unless I tried to try to cut the scope, but I'm not sure if this is just enough, or too little.
Any thoughts?
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Oh, I forgot. in panel 5 of page 373, there's meant to be a word bubble but I have to re-letter the page. Annie says something about how Thomas is never surprised by anything.
