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Pulse 388 WIP 1
🕑 Added 2020-06-30 21:05:35 +0000 UTCThis is still pretty early. No dialog yet, I'm still trying to figure out how to balance the page here. I feel like I need to have kind of a wrap up. Charlotte and other characters are going to be the focus of the next chapter. At this point, Annie and Lucy have barely slept since the sleepwalker event yesterday. I figure they are both about ready to fall over.
Charlotte goes to the complex and things happen there (also Dr. Mae needs more time with her). --So I need to figure out here how to have the transition from this chapter, to the next chapter, which starts on the very next page. I think I'll jump ahead some amount of time and just have Annie and Lucy asleep in Charlotte's room and them all in costumes of some kind (maybe just Charlotte's clothes?). Then Annie and Lucy are left behind sleeping as the story continues.
Dialog for panel 1: I think Charlotte and Annie suggest that Lucy doesn't want to wear Charlotte's outfit because she wouldn't look good in it.
Panel 2: This somehow pushes the right buttons with Lucy and she does wear it, but is still complaining.
Panel 3: Lucy says that they know owe her, and she can dress the two of them up however she wants.
Panel 4: Dr. Mae enters informing them of something, like Charlotte's grandparents will be there soon. Lucy says revenge doesn't take very long.
Notes: They must have changed seating positions from the previous page? Annie was on the other side of Charlotte before.
