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A Day Off No Matter What page 7
🕑 Added 2020-08-10 05:38:05 +0000 UTCI had to flip the top panel, it seemed odd that Annie was on the left in most panel, and Lucy on the right. ...in retrospect the shadows might be wrong then?
I'll have to go back once this is done and look for little mistakes to fix anyway. Sometimes you need fresh eyes to evaluate mistakes you noticed, or to notice unseen mistakes. Also sometimes you only notice mistakes if viewing the pages in order. I just noticed that on the previous page Annie was missing her ring around her neck in one panel.
Kinda feel like Annie's bust might not project forward enough in panel two.
Any thoughts welcome.
EDIT: fixed the mistakes I mentioned on this page.
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ThePrederick
Definitely underestimated the volume of butt on display in the sketch. XD
