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🕑 Added 2020-11-09 11:48:55 +0000 UTCWhat I'm trying to do here is humanize Mira a bit. She's used to being cold and strong, so any breaks in that mask must be something huge. A lot of huge things have happened while she was gone. I also want to show that she's more mature than Arim. She's the leader of their team, she has to be smart. She was also the leader of a team were both of the other members had huge weaknesses.
I need to alter the transition in-between the last two panels a bit. Maybe add a speak bubble to the beginning of the last panel that says something like "everything falls apart when I'm not around". The wording in that last panel needs adjusting. It sounds a little different than I intended.
The person she's about to visit is her future love interest. I thought Mira's lover would be someone sort of submissive, and she'd at least seem like the aggressive one.
