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Materia Enhanced IV, page 10
🕑 Added 2021-02-22 10:04:43 +0000 UTCPart of the reason to get the Android tablet was to get a portable device that could split up the work I usually can only do at my computer. So I thought I'd try doing a comic on the tablet too. Even though at some point I'd switch the file to the PC and complete it.
I'm not sure what I think of his page yet. I'm worried the pace is too slow compared to previous pages.
Tifa leaves and continues questioning Yuffie and Rikku's crazy story, now that she has more information. But when she arrives back at the bar, it's being robbed. I wonder if should cut the cliffhanger last panel and rework it to show the the robbery on this page, instead of having to show it on the next page.
What happens is that Tifa stops the robbery easily, but Yuffie and Rikku tried and couldn't. They're both more unbalanced than they realized. The whole thing side-tracks Tifa, but she says something to make the duo realize she's suspecting them, and they need to build up their lie. Then cut to the end of this part.
So maybe 2-3 more pages after this?
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TF Commando
Well, it's a whole page of Tifa thinking or talking to herself, but if it goes to action on the next page as she fights the robbers, that would balance it out. Perhaps put in a flashback panel of Yuffie and Rikku trying and failing (and falling or bouncing around) as they explain things too.
