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A Day Off No Matter What pages 20-24 WIP
🕑 Added 2021-04-05 09:26:30 +0000 UTCI thought I needed to start trying to plan out the next bit of pages for each of the open series. I started with "A Day Off No Matter What" because it's the only one that's near the end.
Page 20-
No change here from the last WIP. Annie wakes up from their fight to find Lucy missing, and goes to find her.
Page 21-
Lucy says she was investigating and the underwater complex wasn't destroyed. While there will be a NSFW version of this and the previous page, there will be a SFW version too. Not sure if in the NSFW version she should only be topless and wearing the bottom from the super-villain outfit.
Page 22-
(this one is accidentally reversed) I thought I needed one a montage of them doing island things before they leave. We have them both diving underwater to see the complex, them searching for the three robots Annie brought, eating on the beach, Lucy diving into a pool near a waterfall. There's two more spots, but I'm not sure what they should be yet. I had considering them taking a selfie, but they already mentioned not taking any communication devices. The last two panels could even be one with them packing, and one with them looking out over a view.
Page 23-
Doorman opens a portal mentioning something about them, and one steps through, then they both quickly push through. He makes some comment that he's glad to see he didn't have to send anyone to search for them.
Page 24-
They both give some vague comments about their vacation, then say they'll be going back next time. As they walk away, you can see they have the super-villain outfits in their bags. They whisper that they also got great Halloween costumes. (I might want to move them down in the last panel so that the word bubbles are only above them.) Then a "THE END" narration box.
Cover-
To go the full thing with this, I'll make a cover too. I'm going to have the two of them, with the island behind them, then above them the computer screen and shadowed versions of the two villains. I'm not sure how Annie and Lucy should be dressed. Part of me things they should be wearing their bathing suits, but they probably should be in the outfits they wore at the beginning of the comic.
