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Materia Enhanced IV, pages 12-14 WIP
🕑 Added 2021-04-17 08:48:49 +0000 UTCWhat I'm trying to do recently is take one series and roughly draw the next bit of the story. Here's Materia Enhanced IV up until the end of this section of the story.
Part of me wanted a big dramatic fight with Tifa and the robber, but I thought the best thing for the story was that it was so simple for her to win that it happened off panel.
The next section will be mostly Rikku and Yuffie sneaking off away one at a time and making people randomly grow with the materia to try to cover their over the top lie about the boob virus in the last section. I'll have to find a way to make that interesting as a story though. Maybe the first few times Rikku goes out keeps failing and can't be honest about it with Yuffie, and she's panicking more and more. She's finding women who already are complaining about back problems, people wearing armor (and growing would hurt them), elderly women, etc. So she'll eventually get really ruthless, or get really lucky and catch some really blatant group of women. Or maybe she goes nuts somehow?
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TF Commando
Tifa probably only gives the girls a 15 minute break, so they’d have to move fast. You could do a montage like the “some days you can’t get rid of a bomb” sequence from the 1966 Batman movie for her unsuitable targets...running into a group of Chocobo Knights re-creationists in armor, tour group of old ladies, “Tai-chi for back pain” class (with a banner saying so) at the park, etc. The “get lucky” option could be a Blitzball arena, where it was ladies league night or just being used as a community pool. They’d all float to the top from their new buoyancy.
Monke
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