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Pulse 454 & 455 WIP 1
🕑 Added 2021-10-26 09:29:24 +0000 UTCWorking on the next few pages. I know what's going to happen, but trying to make it resolve by the end of the chapter (on page 460 I think).
I'm trying to steer the story in a direction. I was trying to explain Mean Evie's plan is to just get to five horns and try to escape the complex. If she was successful, she's be -at least- in the top five heroes, if not the strongest known hero. The odds of her being able to break out aren't bad, although after five horns her power doesn't increase with damage. If that became obvious to everyone, they could just let loose on her.
Pulse 454-
My theory is that Mean Evie is part of Evilyn's subconscious. She always seems to complain about things, and has a lot of built up rage. I thought Mira is here to talk and she would get right to it. The softer Mira is starting to fade away here, maybe she's syncing up with her current self.
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I tried to use a wall of word bubbles as a panel gutter. On one side we have Mean Evie and Mira talking, on the other size Mean Evie in the real world confronting Pulse and the twins.
Then in the middle panels we have sick Mira turn into cyborg Mira. Gaining curves and maybe four inches in height. Not sure if I should try to alter the panels into something more traditional here.
Mastermind is knocked out of Evilyn's mind, but Mira is still there.
On the next page, we'll have Mira fighting Mean Evie in Evilyn's mind, and in the real world Mean Evie gets another horn by getting hurt somehow.
The story is winding down here though, it'll be over to some degree by the end of the chapter on page 460. My current plan is the next chapter is to deal with all of the many many things introduced the last few storylines (and this one), then a story about Pulse actually taking on an actual super-villain (as the story transitions from them as trainees to being actual superheroes).
