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Pulse 452 & 453 WIP 1
🕑 Added 2021-10-10 09:08:02 +0000 UTCPage 452-
- A drowsy Mean Evie.
- The woman with smoke powers changes her smoke to something that'll knock Mean Evie out.
- Mean Evie mouth blasts blowing the smoke away and revealing two of the others were nearby.
- The blast continues, knocking the blue guy back, and moving towards Mira and Mastermind who are still in the back of the room.
- A bit of Pulse flying with cords attached to her back.
- The door to the room is forcefully set down in front of Mira and Mastermind (with Pulse behind it).
- Pulse is holding back the door as it's hit with the blast. She says something like "These doors are made from some kind of space rock and they're indestructible!".
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- Mean Evie focuses her blast on the door.
- Pulse is being pushed back.
- The two fast women run up and help her push.
- Annie looks back at Mira and Mastermind and asks why aren't they done yet.
- In Evilyn's mind, Mira talks to Evilyn.
- Another view, with lots of room for text.
I knew Annie would come in with the door as a shield, but she doesn't play a giant part in what's next. That seemed like it would be too silly to think a D-Class hero could do more than be support.
I felt like I have several options here for a resolution-
- Nigel, Mira and Arim escape with Evilyn's and become villains to protect her.
- The solution to Mean Evie is something about Evilyn's mind or memories.
- She fails and they take her powers away, or kill her.
- There's a way to have her gain control of Mean Evie under certain conditions.
I didn't have one picked out in advance, but I think I've selected one recently.
