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Pulse 466 & 467 WIP 1
🕑 Added 2022-03-02 12:08:42 +0000 UTCOkay the next two pages.
Pulse 466-
- Thomas puts his shirt on Annie (if you noticed, he had a shirt on over a t-shirt to allow this to be simple).
- He says something like he doesn't want her to be uncomfortable. Maybe there's some comment about how she's really going to launch out of the suit.
- Annie ejects from the suit. Because the suit opens, it's now just Thomas's shirt on her. I have to look at previous pages to see if the difference in size between them would result in a shirt that big.
- Thomas catches Annie. I think I might have made her too big compared to him. Not sure how the shirt would be covering her here, it could be barely hiding anything.
- Annie looks back at the suit noticing it still didn't turn back into a ring.
Pulse 467-
- Annie puts on the shirt properly.
- Annie still adjusting while Thomas stands with his back to her.
- Annie says something like "I thought this would be really sexy, but it's too cute!"
- she might say here "I don't even think I could pop the buttons if I tried." (and change the pose a little if that dialog)? Or maybe it's a transition page where she's re-focusing on the suit?
- Annie mentions she's regained a small amount of her charge.
- She shocks her suit to see if it needs power.
- It doesn't do anything.
(spoiler alert below)
The thing is, remember when Annie was frozen in that pool? And they realized someone tampered with her suit? Then took out a part that shouldn't be there? That's my theory here. That's what's wrong with her suit, and I think I have a way to tie it in so it doesn't seem like it's something Annie didn't solve herself.
