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🕑 Added 2022-05-25 11:15:07 +0000 UTCI thought I should have a montage to show time passing. I don't know if I should try to add as much dialog as possible, or leave it silent.
Some of these are open to change.
- Bumper cars. Charlotte might be telling them they don't have to bump.
- Annie's too short for a ride. I'm reconsidering this one. Looking up online, at 5' 3", Annie should be -way- above the minimum requirement for any ride. She's have to be like a foot shorter.
- Arcade. Seems like a solid option.
- Karaoke. A keeper.
- Blank. Open for something.
- Movie theater. I think maybe Charlotte says something and Tabitha responds. It's either something to show Charlotte's personality, or something to show off Tabitha's anime interests.
One option for the missing panels I've considered is making two that are related. I'd move everything else up, and have the two bottom panels connected. One panel shows all three on a giant water-slide. The next panel shows them at the bottom and Annie has lost her top. ... just something I'm considering. Any suggestions welcome.
What happens on the next page is they end up at the comic shop Annie visits. They'll all end up getting dressed up by Jesse.
