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🕑 Added 2022-07-03 09:00:15 +0000 UTCOkay, not what I originally expected, but this seemed like a semi-obvious direction. I wanted this chapter to be sort of a introduction to them being superheroes and fighting super-villains. On the next page of this Charlotte will be worried because none of them are allowed yet to be active heroes (which continues into the next story where Annie is trying to secretly stop a super-villain). Here, Tabitha will tell them she isn't even in her normal costume, so she won't get in trouble for this. Maybe Cops come along and Charlotte and Tabitha charm their way out of it?
After this, I have four more pages to this chapter. So wrap up for this, then a transition page or something, then two pages for the hot springs.
I might alter the dialog so that Tabitha doesn't say "love" twice. Maybe she says "Justice and the Moon" in the upper panel.
