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Maximum Max 15-21 WIP
🕑 Added 2022-08-28 11:36:07 +0000 UTCOkay, here's my plan for the next few pages-
I haven't exactly decided about the dialog for these first two panels. It kind of depends on Max. Is she only just realizing she'd like to be bigger, has she always felt less than the other family members and Sam knows about it, or has she always felt less and kept it a secret.
So we have Max and Sam ending their day together, then Max strips down and tries to come to terms with herself. She's flirty and confident, so some large amount of her has to think she's hot stuff.
Then we show the college that Sam's husband works, I guess showing this is the same city as Pulse. I'll need to have some dialog from Max about her choice to investigate getting bigger.
I didn't think Max would be good at sneaking around, she'd almost blurt out her plans to Noah directly. They debate and Max goes through some tests.
I figure she ends up in a waiting room and bumps into one of the other women from the family party. There was an Asian woman who is married to someone, and she's also doing it too somehow. Max recognizes her and wishes her good luck.
I know this is kind of a slow burn situation, but I thought that most other comics rush through the whole thing and end up with half-way characters and no sense to the whole thing. The point of this is something gradual, lighthearted, funny, and with fun characters.
I figure there might be 3-4 people who grow, but for a while it'll only be Max and the other woman. You'll just see the other woman's progress when Max has to return to be examined or something. Later on, Max's boyfriend's sister moves in with them to go to college. She'll be in the comic for a little bit first and then undergo the process too. It's also possible the sister's friend might also much later in the comic.
I'm wondering if I should have 30 page sections. Section one is the setup and ends with her either starting to grow, or she has to admit about the experiment to her boyfriend. Then section two is just about her growing, the second three is about Ben's sister moving in with them. And then so on.
