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Pulse 533 & 534 WIP 1
🕑 Added 2024-02-17 09:59:17 +0000 UTCPages always go faster when it's characters I can draw from memory... as you can see what I've completed here and what I haven't.
Page 533-
I was trying to decide how quickly to jump into the separation of the characters. I can, especially in the past, cut way too fast from one thing to another.
First I show them meeting the other six. There will probably be a lot of narration on this page. One of the girls sees Annie's bust and says "Look! It must all be true!"
Then there's a panel of Charlotte hugging Annie and Lucy. "I'm not going anywhere!" Lucy shouts. Then Lucy is at Charlotte's house, saying "I'm taking you up on your offer to stay with you two, but it's not that I'm lonely without Annie around". Then there's the panel with Tabitha with Connor and Grace, and she'll say something funny.
Page 534-
I thought I'd save Annie going back home for it's own page. She enters with her parents beside her, and her mom floating that tool chest in the air. She looks at the main area, and then goes to her old room. She comments the robot vacuum has done a good job, and it's kept her room very clean. Then her computer talks, "Master, I have spent the last few years adapting myself to better serve you. I've waited for your return."
