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Pulse 533-535 WIP
🕑 Added 2024-02-19 10:23:36 +0000 UTCOkay, this chapter will be a split up between a lot of shorter events. I think the chapter will be called "Bits and Bytes".
So we start with a resolution with the other six batteries, and then we start splitting up the main characters. On the first page I show Lucy moving in with Charlotte (She denies it's because she's lonely without Annie as her roommate), Tabitha with Connor and Grace.
Then I wait to the next page to show Annie going home to give it more space. She checks on her robot vacuum-- only to find out it's adapted and taken over. It goes into it's plans to expand to cleaning outside, and that she's grown up exactly like it expected ("Really?! I wonder if the webcam is broken."), then she just unplugs it and says "I have six months to figure this out".)
I'm not sure yet about the other pages yet-- or I don't know all of what will happen yet. There could be pages that switch between each group, or a page with just one of the three sets of people. And there will be some training pages too. I also think I'll have Annie growing out her hair, probably mostly just out of not taking care of herself. Like Lucy keeps her orderly, even more than her mom.
Before the end though, Charlotte will get her own narrative. When Thomas reveals himself and asks for help. I figure that has to happen, and it'll be a good idea to put it in the six-month time-skip. It'll probably be the last few pages, then some of that next chapter, and also the end of the time-skip too.
Before the next WIPs, I'm going to try to write the narration and dialog over the art in red so I'm not waiting until the end for that. I figure there will be a lot of narration, except for the parts that are about Annie, or the parts Annie couldn't know about.
