Georghiou2D
patreon
Ep 4 Act 1 Draft 1 (Deleted Scene)
🕑 Added 2025-04-09 05:33:01 +0000 UTCWhen I make Day Job episodes, I use an iterative approach, where I record and storyboard each draft to see how it feels, and then change what's not working. Sometimes I even scrap a story all together. This means there are a lot of deleted drafts from the original 3 episodes sitting around. For example, the first draft of episode 3 didn't even have Rico in it until the rewrite. (These massive changes are definitely for the best lol)
So usually these deleted drafts just go unused, but for this batch of episodes, I thought it would be interesting to give patrons a candid look at the show's creation process in real time, and share a bunch of deleted scenes as I progress.
This week we've recorded a second draft of episode 4, which means last month's original draft has now been scrapped, and dumped here for you to enjoy. There are no spoilers for the episode here, because the story has completely changed since. Please forgive my terrible Hannah impression, and rest assured, the final episode will be much better than this lol
Comments
Dav
Damn if this is getting scrapped I'm really interested in what the episode Wil actually be, this is good stuff
Paul Georghiou
Thank you so much! Your pledge helps immensely :)
PurpleFlame32
I love the plot of this episode already! Can't wait to see more!
![Someday*[サムデイ] from fanbox](https://patrefans.com/kistorage/107168.jpg)
