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🕑 Added 2022-01-26 22:41:36 +0000 UTCHello to all the new Patreons! I’m amazed with how many of you there are and I’m extremely grateful for your contribution to this project! I hope you enjoy catching up on the story so far, there’s a Dropbox file post with all of the story collected to far within it, bar the last few pages.
Comments
Callum Diggle
Welcome to the Patreon and thanks for your support! That’s a fair critique, I try not to bombard people with too much exposition through the story because it can interrupt narrative flow but it’s a fine line. What kind of explanation would you like to see in the story?
Michael Houghton.
I'm new here to your patreon, signed up today and so far loving it, all i will say on a constructive criticism front is that maybe a little more explanation with some of the dialogue - like a conversation where its explained why he calls Loste "endling" and abit more of a friendship growth, id happily read through a few extra pages of those 2 having moments of banter etc. all in all a great read though cant wait to see more!
Callum Diggle
That’s awesome to hear! The algorithm god has truly smiled on me this day haha
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Came here from the Curious Archive videos, who in turn was blessed by the algorithm (I was not even subscribed!). And with a tier of £1 I felt I HAD to support the patreon. I loved your work.
Callum Diggle
Hahah I love that!
you should call us your patreons Endlings :) more appropriate
Callum Diggle
I’m glad the recommendations brought you all the way here bud, thanks so much for your support!
Callum Diggle
That’s great to here, I’m glad to have you here Jesse! I’ll be back to putting out more pages tomorrow.
Jesse James
Just watched the Curious Archive video, this project seems really interesting. I can’t wait to see where it goes.
Yeah thankful for youtube recommendations! This is awesome
Callum Diggle
Aw I’m happy it has brought you here too!
DiMass
This is some crazy awesome Sci-fi. My YouTube addiction has paid off bringing me here lol.
Callum Diggle
Oh, Belfast, the AI in Lostés head is translating everything for him in real time, I might go back and add a little info panel explaining that.
How they understand each other language? Did I missed something? =)
Callum Diggle
Ah thanks so much man, we’re happy to have you here!
Callum Diggle
Cheers, Chris! I’m glad to see it’s being appreciated by people like yourself ^^
Came from YouTube. This series contains some of the best word-building I’ve ever seen in sci-fi.
Great page Callum. Really impressed with the effort you're putting into world building!
Neotoria .
Looking spectacular as ever!! 🔥🔥
Callum Diggle
Thanks as always, Ryan 🤙
Callum Diggle
Yeah, you can’t use bullets on a spaceship and this weapon is primarily used on board to break up crew scuffles.
Callum Diggle
Thank you, Lucca!
Sixty-nine trampolines
Wow visually this is absolutely amazing
Unraveler
So this is a blast wave gun?
Ryan
Good god this is absolutely fantastic