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Update on event narration and brief news regarding custom characters.
🕑 Added 2025-07-21 18:21:43 +0000 UTCSomeone from F95zone approached me to ask if I needed help with the game.
Naturally, I told them I'd soon be looking for someone to help me write my scenes.
This person offered, so I gave it a try.
This person wanted to remain anonymous and even wanted me to take credit for their help, but I don't work like that.
I like people helping me and contributing to my project, and I appreciate how they brought something new to the table.
They offered a new take on the general phrasing of events, and I wanted to know what you thought about it via a poll.
You can download a scene from the next update with the new phrasing in this post.
It was quickly made with GIMP so don't focus on the presentation but on the content.
The main change is that a narrator will now trashtalk Aysha.
The event is about Aysha seducing a werewolf, so it's not a defeat or a rape event.
I found the idea quite amusing and really sexy for certain events, where it would really emphasize Aysha's situation.
It also seems that not so many of you were interested in creating custom characters, but I still received a few requests and got some good results that don't really resemble what I usually do.
Anyway, feel free to contact me if you'd like your own character.
Comments
arthas Lordcraft
Also, just because someone helped me write certain scenes doesn't mean I'm no longer interested in how you'd like to see them written. So if you have your own ideas on how you'd like to see them written, feel free to share; so far, I've always received really interesting concepts and texts.
arthas Lordcraft
Yes, I see what you mean. Now that I reread the scene, it's true that it seems super aggressive to me. I think when we wrote this scene this weekend, I was in a certain mood, and now that I'm taking a step back, it seems a bit extreme. Thanks for sharing your opinion. I'm going to rewrite the scene to make it less aggressive and work on your "ghost" idea, which is very good, I must say, and it helps me enormously because I had another idea in mind, but I needed something to lead it in, and this idea might help me make it work!
ArchonStorm
It feels far too agressive and malicious for just a narrator. I can't perfectly pinpoint it, but the best reason is that it feels like personal attacks on her, and, at least for now and without context, without reason. You could make it a ghost thats possessing her and give it some motive to be that harsh (would open up the possibility for aysha to hear and react to the dirty/trash-talk); someone that's involved in the story/has an incentive. If you plan to stay with the narrator, you should tone down the trash-talk (the dirty talk part is fine). Because a narrator usually is neutral, having him insult and generally be mean to her makes the audience think they, as well, should dislike her. Just to reiterate the dirty talk part is perfectly fine, (not that there would be much need for the narrator if you left that out :) )
