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The Three Commandments - Page 25

🕑 Added 2020-07-18 14:25:53 +0000 UTC

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Allon the Cookie Dragon

Such a sad ending, but a very good story! <3 <3 <3 Such lovely artwork in all of it too, and hope these two will grow old and well together... and hopefully not get to Great Warden status. ;)

Avery H. Mavery

Also, Jagon, if you'll indulge me. I'm morbidly curious to know what happened to Jenna after that. Did she die of heartache? Why in the nine hells did they kill Lorath if they were so worried about using him as a... breeding tool? So far it just looked like the whole place turned to mutiny and just turned into stupid, violent bandits. Having a monarchy is kinda stupid in a lot of cases anyways so hopefully they changed up how things are ruled. Yes i'm very, very, very mad that this had to have such a tragic ending. But compelling writing makes us emotional so, especially when it slaps us with a hard dose of reality, the good and bad of it.

Avery H. Mavery

I hope that they show the idiots why that shouldn't be a commandment. Just seems like a thinly veiled reason to be able to tell other people to not do something, just cause they think it's gross. There is some more caveats to it than that of course but in most cases it should be fine assuming it's approached in the same way any other healthy relationship could be.

andrew henriksen

Maybe they would just do it once a while in a secret place

Lev

These are not legends really, especially the last part. It's way too specific to be just a thing to scare interspecies lovers. I'm looking forward to finding out how the pair would handle their love after Aida read whole book.

Zhon Lord

Very much looking forward to Chapter 3 whenever it happens. In the meantime, Aida and Keleth know what's at stake and what they need to avoid, in order to stay alive and stay together. It'll be interesting to see what solution they come up with when the next chapter begins