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Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2024-07-20 04:08:36 +0000 UTC

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Gabby

I joined here a few days ago as I'd been reading neighbor chronicles on lit a few years ago and I thought it had just been abandoned. But then I heard there was an additional chapter on here, so thought I'd join and read out of curiosity of how it continued. It's fine but has been left abandoned once again. So I won't be keeping my membership here, I'm not sure Patreon is the right platform for someone who only writes once every year or so. Maybe I'll stay as a free member and check back to see if new chapters have been posted. Paying $20 for a chapter is too much anyway, but paying $20 per month for potentially one chapter per year is frankly ridiculous.

Bri

I love this story and chapters so much so I followed you here darling. I love the corruption and turning out of Amber into the slut she has become and her discovery of the pleasure of submission and love of Cock and sex. I suspect and hope she will discover hopefully with Stacy that she is also bi and loves pussy too. I love how both Amber and Jack are dominating Bill and his embrace of his cuckold status, the wearing of condoms is a deliciously sexy development, not too much further and the next thing you know he’s wearing a chastity cage (I love mine). I also am so turned on by the little details that may, or may not, lead to a new twist and are therefor tantalizing. For example, David saying to Billy, “im surprised a guy like you is even married”, what does that mean? Billy is obviously submissive to some extent and we know cucks can be straight, bi or completely gay… is it just a throwaway line or is something brewing that David may expose? The co-worker coming up and asking Billy why Amber is partnering with David instead of Stacy and that all Billy’s co-workers are discussing it among themselves was also a titillating tidbit with Billy’s answer that it was his idea making that exchange even mor revealing and exciting. Ch. 10 is so sexy culminating in Amber sucking David’s cock with her tits and pierced nipples hanging out (did the others not notice the piercings through her thin bikini top) confessing she doesn’t suck Billy’s cock, and her receiving a copious facial maybe a 100 feet from Billy, all his co-workers and their wives, Stacy and Jack. David’s questioning mind and Amber’s “maybe got a little bit more” tease of Billy was also very arousing, my fervent wish is that you develop the Amber-David relationship and the exposure at work theme as you continue with Amber’s submission to Jack, would also welcome Billy’s intro to developing a taste post anniversary celebration for sloppy seconds, fresh creampies and snowballs, preferably in Jack’s presence and under his supervison. Please keep up the great work as we all eagerly await the next chapter! Also love her getting turned on by her exposure to the mailman and the introduction of butt plugs with J stamped on them is so arousing. Thank you! Bri a/k/a capri

Mbroms

Pt 12-2 or 13 eta?

Stephen

The best way this all ends is on the anniversary Bill hands Amber his own tapes of him and Stacey having their own dirty escapades behind her back so Amber can be Jealous as well as Bill. What's good for the Goose is good for the Gander.

Nash

You ever writing or releasing the next chapter or you just going to keep us paying for nothing?

Davide Vinciguerra

it would be interesting a BDSM scene or a threesome with Stacey which could be the first threesome for Amber (like all the first experiences she gave to Jack and not to Bill)

woods

Just as fantastic as the rest of the story and can't wait to read more, hopefully soon

Robert Robinson

Are you now done with this story?

WILLYBOY

Think Jack would segue plugs to invite David with smaller but longer cock to double Amber for first anal, while Jack intends a pregnancy shot?

WILLYBOY

Great continuation, adding in a huber driver (or the coworker) invite in sequence for butt plug replacement before huge cock, and add in pregnancy risk.

kai to

Sheesh when the next chapter coming out

Mike litterus

I love th direction the story is going with amber slowly falling for jack…would be wild to see that she admits she loves jack or even gets pregnant in the end 👀

Chescojoe

I think the cost should cover 2 stories (of a certain length)

Bob James

Is there a timeline for the next chapter?

Robert Robinson

And find out that bill changed here birth control to fertility pills so she would get knocked up on there anniversary.

Robert Robinson

I think she should end up stay with jack till there anniversary as well and every day they have sex and every night they end up making love .

Ruben

And again we lowkey get dooped into subscribing

Thuan Nguyen Duc

Has chapter 12 finished?

John

Yeah I can see this heading that way. Jack will probably do something wild the day before Amber & Bill's anniv day. Amber will get so lost in it that she'll wake up a day after their anniversary. Add to the things Jack will take from Bill.

Pranav Muley

I re read the 11 chapters. Now coming to 12th, 1. Jack and Stacey might have done something at the bbq. 2. Since she blew David, Jack is also gonna make Amber jealous by fucking Stacey. 3. As Amber's kisses with Jack are getting longer and more intimate and her submission is getting easier, an emotional liking for Jack is to be developed. 4. My mind says.. since Bill is being denied stuff slowly, how about Amber staying out of the house till the night of the anniversary. This way, Bill hasn't fucked, touched, seen or even spoken to Amber until the last few hours of their anniversary. Bill decorating the house, cake, flowers, jewellery, all while Amber is screaming her first I love you to Jack in his bed

WILLYBOY

David's Uncle after birth control change

WILLYBOY

David?

WILLYBOY

Will Bill covertly change her birth control to test her celibacy claim? Will Jack introduce another to expand her anally for him? Another Huber type control demo?

Chris K

Does she keep telling herself how much she loves Bill because she knows it's not really hate she feels for Jack? I hope he really is breaking those barriers down!