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Chapter 82 Storm in The Junkyard Copse

🕑 Added 2022-01-07 01:06:08 +0000 UTC

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MrAcerulez

I’m starting to think they are attacking specifically to get her killed. It’s not an obvious assassination attempt before there’s always other victims, but she is always involved with them. Once or twice is a coincidence but three times is a pattern.

Adurna

At least they should properly move against the people trying to kill children.

Michael Maor

Very nice chapter, but I really hope something happens with the terrorists soon other than another repeat of them attacking, hurting people and disappearing. I liked Alana handling triage A couple of typos I spotted: " from the where the latter" - first "the" should be removed. "she was still doing well enough to stay alive and conscious," This doesn't work as a sentence, you could have "she was doing well enough to stay alive and conscious," or "she was still alive and conscious," would work.

Michael Maor

It was the terrorists, remember the lightning weapon they used before? That's what she recognized

Jose Cordones

Is it the same people that attacked before?

Vickie Chan

When reading this chapter after a 2 day break from the previous chapter, I didn't remember the names of the team members and each person's role. So when you said Alana grabbed the wizard, I had no idea you were talking about Ean without having to re-read the previous chapter. Also, the team member names are very similar in the sense that three of them start with E, two of them start with ET, and two of them end with the sound "en" (at least to me). I've read comments about how readers tend to see the beginning and end of a word but tend to gloss over the middle. I was reading this chapter quickly, so when I tried to skim up to find which character was the wizard and then checking back to Chapter 81, I briefly thought Ean got hurt because he was acting as a tank. It wasn't clear to me that when Ean got hurt, he was in the back line. Etta being upset with him for not taking cover didn't make it clear enough to me. So I confused him with Glen for a bit. My confusion is because I was reading the chapter quickly, but not repeating Glen, Ean, and Ethbert's roles and their similar names didn't help prevent confusion.

Tom Henman

Sounds like claymore type mine. Ie Humans. Just guessing btw.

Wandering Agent

Error, fixed.

Mike G.

Interesting - what sparky mob did they run into? <i>I took a few moments extra to toss up, before tapping </i> -&gt; toss up a shield?

luda305

FFFFF

Kedar

I really hope after this the shield church is going to realize that staying silent to the kingdom and empire governments about who she is and who her father is is going to jeopardize their neutrality, especially with a third party terrorist group already at odds with the churches.


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