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Chapter 58 The irritant

🕑 Added 2021-10-22 03:14:34 +0000 UTC

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Stephen

idk, maybe Eleanor can show her how to open a bank account instead of keeping her savings somewhere (eg. under her matress) where they can be stolen or lost in a fire. Would Alana be allowed to open a bank account until now without her guardian (The Shield) present to vouch for her? Or perhaps there are no banks in this world, except for wealthy nobles/mages? Or maybe Alana has been storing her savings in Luciens strongbox (if he has one)? Or maybe she and Kala can go book shopping and see how expensive everything is, or have a discussion about Academy costs. idk.

Wandering Agent

That is quite fair criticism. I'll try to work more of that into the story.

Stephen

Alana's financial situation hasn't been mentioned for some time now. I remember her sewing gold/silver into her belt, but its hasn't been discussed how much money she's making (eg. working at The Sky, selling sugar, charging magical items, illusions for balls), how much she's saved up, nor how much the tuition for the academy is. So I don't have much to go on...

Stephen

I kind of got the impression that Alana was quite a bit richer than Dras and decided to chip in half on the book because she felt sorry for him ... so she could afford to buy more books. Also, the fact that Alana hasn't been worrying about saving up enough money to cover Academy tuition, while Dras seems to have been saving for 4+ years, I assumed Alana could easily make that kind of money in less than a year. Maybe I've gotten the wrong impression...

Wandering Agent

While The Shield has books, they are expensive and loaning them out would not really be something small. Alana similarly doesn't want to owe them any more favors. As for buying some, keep in mind that the one they did purchase was enough to make Dras, who had a decent amount of money at that point, balk. Books are expensive. Books on actual magic are very, very, expensive.

Stephen

I'm kind of surprised Alana hasn't picked up any other books to study from or tried to wrangle usage of the Shield's book collection from the Bishop to learn more about magic or the mathematical inscription language... the Bishop might look at it as a good way to keep her at "home" in the inn and out of trouble. I assume Kala will be bringing her borrowed dress back at some point, so Kala meets Eleanor will be interesting

Bridie

A very rich slice of life chapter which I enjoyed.

Some BS Deity

Eleanor is going to find this arrangement to be very taxing until she gains Alana's respect and adds something useful to the relationship.

D

Wouw, i never thought she would let that woman get away with that much. x)) I certainly wouldnt have, guess mc is a better person than me.

The Lost Pages

Excellent point.

Leviathon251

Nice. Can't wait for Alaina to go to *sparkle* Magic school *sparkle*. 😁

Jachin Nelson

Thank you for the chapter

Autumn

Alana is under close watch due to her dad and Mystien being big players in the faction that staged a coup d'etat in the Empire. When Alana calls the Bishop an asshole, Eleanor says, "His concerns are keeping the country as stable as it can be" which could be hinting she knows at least some details behind her current assignment.

The Lost Pages

Part of me wonders what Eleanor sees as her role in all this. Taking care of one child is hardly a good use of time. lol.


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