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Chapter 109 A Quick Outing and Irritated Mentor

🕑 Added 2022-04-03 02:27:18 +0000 UTC

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Matthew Dennis

Spell kept me from getting warm - spell to keep me warm

Jim Kelly

The way that Mystien approaches the conversation about the walkie talkies will give Alana insight as to how much she wants to cooperate about such things in the future. She is a treasure trove of valuable information (the English language, sky metal, chemistry, physics, mathematics and numerous modern innovations that could be introduced or magically adapted). She could buy a villa somewhere and become ridiculously wealthy just producing aluminum.

Stephen

Maybe having to memorize the safe house list will encourage Alanna to figure out some way to do note taking in her core?

Sam Tailor

I’m fine with how she treats her family and listens to them. But I also think her total acceptance of their warfare is odd in these two chapters considering the worry and anger she’s had over military conflict in the previous chapters. I’m very interested in what she’ll say or do about the earpieces next chapter, as pieces of military technology. And when will she learn and what will she think of Mystien using that water magic symbol she taught him and killing thousands with it.

Stephen

I mostly disagree. She wasn't abandoned, she was kidnapped. After she was kidnapped, she went to a nearby city and send a "postal message" to her family, which was returned with the remark that that her hometown no longer exists. Her family members did look for her. Her brother: "We searched for a week finding no trace before we finally gave up, my mother forcing the issue. I had to accept as I took her and my uncle to the place dad had told us of." I was kind of disappointed Alana didn't defend herself more when her father criticized her for going to the capital city (in the previous chapter). She could have explained she sent a letter which couldn't be delivered because her home town was destroyed, nor could the priests discover anything, and that she waited for quite some time there. After that she had the choice of only Lucien or Veska as probable people Mystien might contact. Although, I suppose, she could have stayed at the Shield's orphanage hoping that the priests would discover something [which they didn't for a long time]. Better to go on living your life and growing rather than spending your life waiting in an orphanage imo.

Scyfe

Somewhat agree, I can see how she would be excited about seeing family again - but just glossing over that she was abandoned with the rest of her family and left to starve/die/get kidnapped and all that like it's no big deal just doesn't seem right.

Mugatu9

I'm gonna be honest, these last two chapters are a major disappointment. She basically forgives everything her father and Mystien have done for no apparent reason, and then let's them bully the shit out of her. It's dumb. She should be furious at them for attacking the academy to try to abduct her, not just going along with everything they say, and telling them all her secrets

David Brims

Mystien doesn't seem to have much respect for boundaries, huh?

Some BS Deity

Lol, nice timing mystien

Mike G.

Good chapter, thanks. "spell kept me from getting warm" -> cold?


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