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🕑 Added 2025-01-03 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Mark_M1102

Keep it up. Make it original if you have to and if the cringe is too much. I’d like for you to continue the stuff with Kendall if you can. and maybe do Barbara later on in the story if you’re not happy with what you’ve done.

Thomas05

yeah true tbh i think vardy staying at Leicester didn't help him. and tbh with Tristan passes Kane should score a lot more in those tournaments.

noname_marco

you do make good points; it just feels weird writing about real-life people and writing relationships but yeah thank you

noname_marco

I mean, it probably depends on the situation after Tristan and the main players leave Leicester City and Vardy level goes down; Kane does start over him, and you gotta remember Kane is way younger and has more potential than an aging Vardy. And Vardy was good for like a season or two compared to Kane but as for the players who Tristan gets close to it, I gotta write that myself, that chinese author doesn't really do a good job on it

Thomas05

will vardy be replcaed on the side by kane because i imagine that if he is working harder to keep up with players like tristan and if tristan becomes england captain no offense to kane but the only reason he would start would be if vardy is getting to old. I think Grealish would be a cool person for him to get close to just for the banter

noname_marco

in the chinese one, its like Luke Shaw, Vardy, and a few others I think,

Thomas05

i think the life stuff is important cause otherwise it is just football matches which will get old real quick. who is he going to be close to other then i imagine shaw on the england side Rice, grealish?

noname_marco

yeah thats what Im worried about as well as I feel like theres no need for drama so I basically do what Kezman said as for the vlog things, yeah that will happen I wanna write more about life to life stuff instead of just football games each chapter

Marcus

I say stick with it till it becomes too overly heavy with the cliche and cringe parts. Interesting thing about Chinese novels is that they do offer more character development and interaction than most fanfic websites. Rather than cut the storyline, you can modify it any way you want which you are probably doing since I haven’t read the raw version. Insert characters you create or real ones that might seem more realistic than the original. Also, the off season arcs are something to look forward to since the main focus is on football. Events like celebrity gatherings and Hollywood are common tropes that have proven to be popular still to garner interest in readers. In any case, love the story and the censorship of certain aspects of the original story.

noname_marco

indeed this is the way, thank you

noname_marco

yeah he ends up with Barbara Palvin who I like more than Kendall Jenner ngl

Adam M

This is the way.

Thomas05

look ill be honest the romance and friendship stuff is good because it makes some reality into it. however relationship drama like that I would drop I would focus on the one romantic interest he gets. Btw in the future are you going to do stuff like the england vlog things they do like reacting to the fifa cards and gogglebox cause i think that stuff would be interesting also just him getting closer to people like vardy and the other english players when he does international.

Kezman

They go out together, do some sight seeing but both realise that there is no spark and decide not to try to date each other and just remain friends. Something like that.

xLucqs

I mean will he get together with her? Are you planning on changing stuff? You said he ends up with another model right?


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