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l K

he boy revved in red, returned in his immaculate maturity. THE AUTHOR more chapters please lad

noname_marco

U do make a fair point and bro I been taking everyone’s input 😭 it’s why I ask lmao I want peoples opinions and thoughts

Adam M

That's fair enough from this fanfics point of view and I get it. But in general? Someone like Kendall and Tristan just simply aren't going to be that invested in each other date 1. They know what the life they chose entails, and the toll it takes on their personal lives. Kendall Jenner, no matter what you may think of her, has direct access to literally every single "tier 1" celebrity in the world. A missed attempt with an up and coming footballer from Leicester of all places isn't going to phase her. It's just true. He's not "there yet" fame wise, and they don't know each other personally for that to matter either. I'm not saying they go on a friendship arc or whatever, in the grand scheme of the story this doesn't matter, it's just an opinion in general for the future I guess. How to handle big time celebrities. As always feel free to ignore my input, I'll be reading anyways, and keep up the good work!

noname_marco

I probably won't try that, even as a friend, knowing she was interested in you, and now your dating another person isn't exactly a good idea. Even if both parties trust each other 100%, it's still better not to be friends with them just so doubts don't seek in, and I experienced this shit firsthand bro

Adam M

I really like the idea of them just becoming friends, even if that's something that stays in the background, not acknowledged beyond the occasional comment. Give the british rags like the sun and papparazzi something to stew over, the missed opportunity. "We're two adults who decided our lives don't match, deal with it. This doesn't sell newspapers but fuck you."

noname_marco

I probably do that without trying to make Kendall look like a jealous bitch for some reason the chinese author is so fixed on writing that lmao, like bro shes kendall jenner, she can get any guy she probably wants

Mark_M1102

Yeah I agree. If Barbra is introduced this close, it’s better to end it there. then again it could still be used in the future. Maybe Tristan goes to US in future and Kendall wants to meet but Tristan has gf etc. As for Chinese MC characteristics, cut them out entirely. I’d just use the originally source as a base to work off football plot wise. Your version for everything else is probably way better.

noname_marco

I was going to do that, but Tristan meets Barbara in like 20 chapters from this one, and there's not much I can do with Kendall in the mean time. And can you imagine the medias reaction if he was still talking with Kendall whilst at the same time talking and and going on dates with Barbara as well, I think I mentioned tristan saying this as well, he doesn't want his partner dealing with this, I don't want to make the mc a typically chinese character, I rewrite a lot to change the mc's personality a lot from the chinese one

Mark_M1102

Much better than last time. It was actually written pretty well this time and the convo was smooth. Bit sad that him and Kendall end things here. Imo, you can kinda keep their relationship open and use that plot point as something to fill in the gaps between football tournaments(plus a few one nights stands is normal). I assume Barbara is introduced later in the story so you can kind use before she comes along. Anyway appreciate the chapter.


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