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Chapter 153: Crowned in Gold

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 06:07:35 +0000 UTC

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Sicario_1011

Love the work so far brother

noname_marco

like Pandjo said and as you are saying, good advice, I plan to start skipping matches and do like 4 matches in one chapter, I'm not gonna write it out, but just the stats something like that but yeah, changes are coming, its just I like writing matches but dont worry im hearing everyone

Torrent

I feel like the progress has been a bit slow ngl, I kinda want it to move a bit faster towards the end of the season. I'm looking forward to Euro 2016 tbh.

Torrent

Personal opinion, we need a few longer timeskips. Tristan has already become a developed player, we don't really need many mid season games to be show fully in a chapter. You could probably do a 4 month time skip and start up at around mid Feb and be fine. I think you should skip the smaller matches and focus more on major matches like against big clubs, major tournament fixtures like FA Cup semi's or Europa League knockout. For the league stage just the last few games which would determine their place on the table. Any other game with a major even like a injury, change in mindset etc too.

noname_marco

Good advice

Bel'Ami Pandjo

The timeskip like that is fine it's kinda been needed because the pacing has been a little slow like 4/10 instead of 5/10 of how the pacing is. It's a good chapter again and the only thing I would probably see you do is a bit more world building. Let Tristan and Barbara meet new people or people they already have meet like get a little more spice in it.


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