Anprim Anthem
🕑 Added 2020-12-21 00:58:15 +0000 UTCJust a draft, let us know in this post what you'd like to see changed/added visually
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Gods Dominatrix
Having two is already not primitive enough
Not sending mail bombs is big mistake
Hunter
mention Ted Kazynski somewhere. Hes a massive meme and needs to be mentioned.
You forgot to mention the mating tent
for something based on the unabomber's manifesto, it's not that edgy. maybe libertarian opens a mail bomb.
Fiona
Who's "Tribe member Ted"? I mean, I already know. But people new to your channel will have no idea. Maybe add a picture of Ted Kaczynski to the background.
Jean-Francois Perreault
You should not listen to this comment but you asked so .... Strong ERB vibes on this one (love it) glitched transition at 0:17 ? on purpose ? looks visually confusing 0:17-0:27 hard to understand as a non native english speaker, this bit seems to be the core message please close caption lyrics love the random anprims getting eaten by tigers 0:38 - 0:51 love this oogabooga is probably problematic, that would be good for user engagement libertarian disappears too fast to understand what's up industrial revolution not very good at all (too many words) ? No, industrial revolution BAD, you are subverting expectation of what we expect him to say but it's not better, it's just unexpected for the sake of being unexpected, if you change his catchphrase (or want to kill this line before it becomes a catchphrase) then he should say something more clever... at least something more than the same thing re-worded not melodious enough until 1:30, then just right, maybe add a few more notes in there to feel like more than background music for anprim's ... spoken word poetry ? 1:20 - 1:30 (and another place) use variation on that camera shake, it's jarring that it repeats the same pattern with only a translation on top. "everything big mistake" not a good enough payoff for how many times you say "big mistake", also after calling everything big mistake, you call language big mistake, which is a lot funnier. I don't think anprim would call "everything" a big mistake, that's more of an anarchonihilist take don't you think ? yeah "language big mistake" that should be the payoff ! transhumanist should die or be dismissed by something that makes anprim looks good (maybe he gets virus, or mind controlled by his musky brain chip, or his battery catches fire) but before he goes transhumanist should say one thing, maybe even just one word and it has to be a zinger against anprim
Just needs subtitles I think!
Greg Guevara
Ye we'll do longer
That's p fuckin rad lol
Miguel Perez
Wawaweewah, this is so great!! I do feel the tiger attack is difficult to see. It gets cut off too quick.
Idk if you’re taking feedback on the song but I think that adding more harmonies and voices in the last chorus would help the song build.
Greg Guevara
Its comin
Waiting for the techno rap battle with Transhumanism.
Greg Guevara
Yup we gotta add the bonk
Greg Guevara
Yup tinting is happening in the final version
I kind of wish Anprim was tinted green in this, but I think that’s just because I’m so used to Centricide Anprim.
mandragara
Very good but I think he needs to bonk Transhumanism with that bone club. Or have a tiger eat him, to show that his augments were worthless after all. Also here's a Tedpill video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ucg5-WMsd6k Gang Retard represent: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BTvNttvUnzg
Please, donate some body hair for this lad.
Anprim doesn’t like the industrial revolution? I’m shocked