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idk (redo)

🕑 Added 2022-04-16 21:32:34 +0000 UTC
idk (redo)

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Sophie Ruth

your knee displays such glorious and powerful definition you are the only person alive allowed to wear those shorts

Lumina

[core memory unlocked]

Lumina

…wait was the background dots adjusting the symmetry on a weavesilk canvas

The dissocation really went hard after this one, exactly what I was looking for! Thank you JrEg!

Consistent up until the last point. The idea of waiting until you're "ready" is just a return to the naïve belief that one "knows" or can "know" when something is "ready". If you truly know that you don't know, there would be no hesitation because you wouldn't presume to know things that aren't there that are blocking you from "doing it".

Yeah, single take also feels more like a dramatic monologue in a way the first version didn’t . Makes it register as a sharper departure from the YouTube-video-form, which I think also accounts for the breakdown vibe. I like this version.

Parker

It was an okay video but the person staring at me from the reflection of my phone screen kind of ruined it for me, 0/10

A precise strike to every cowardly pretentious and despicable human brain cell

minipasila

I kinda like the breakdown feeling for this, even if it wasn't intended. Also the ending works better with the breakdown version.

Lumina

Comparatively this one feels more like a breakdown than the edited first try. Not sure if that’s the intended read or not, tho


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