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2 versions of the same joke

🕑 Added 2023-02-16 01:21:41 +0000 UTC

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Sophie Ruth

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Jar Of Sadness

Version 2 is better my tiny mind can’t comprehend version 1

DopamineDealer

I like version 2, it has more a rhythm? Nice stove by the way.

DopamineDealer

I "got" the joke on version 2 better (my first language not English might factor into that somehow)

Fiona

I agree with Lumina. Version 1 is the best one.

Lumina

Version 1 works better. I will not elaborate.

Akilan Narayanaswamy

I like the continuous dialogue of version 2 but I like the lines from version 1 better

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Moses McGhee

Also, the continuous shot of version 2 is better looking, though I don't know if the shorts format would make it too difficult to do that with version 1's lines. Maybe a cut after the silent generation would make sense, and then another cut just before gen z (so you can get that sweet sweet perfect loop with the greatest generation)

Moses McGhee

The line the silent generation says in version two is great, and makes it really clear what the analogy is. Version 1 is better as a concept, because it really shows the way the steps are reasonable enough between the generations. However the slow fades between the generations names from version 2 is between at joining the time period together, when I watched version 1 the first time, I couldn't read what the generations were until a couple had slipped by already

evolutionary autocannibal

if i have to choose, i think 2 is a lot more intuitive and resonant, and that the dialogue is much better. they’re both great, as usual. maybe you should try blending them together a little.


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