Inma R.
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WBFH18: pages 20~25 + sketches.
🕑 Added 2024-04-19 09:34:28 +0000 UTCAnd that's the end of the chapter ( ' v ' )
I have the feeling this part is going to bring me drama in Webtoon. Not because of what Yule does to Axel, but because he says "Ragnar's mine" and he shows possessiveness. When I write my characters they always speak to me what they would say or how they feel, and when I was writing that part, Yule was in possessive mode because he has finally found a home, a man that treats him kindly... And Axel is threatening all that, so it put him in alert mode, in "I must protect what I have" mode. Problem is many Webtoon readers expect main characters to be little rays of sunshine with 0% defects, so I'm pretty sure some people are going to be mad at that sentence π I did consider changing it to avoid any possible drama, but then the result would not be "what Yule would say", I'd feel like forcing Yule to be a character he isn't.
Of course Yule is not possessive to the point he'd disregard Ragnar's feelings. If Ragnar didn't want him anymore he'd accept that. But currently it's clear to him that Ragnar does want him, so he feels the right to claim Ragnar as his.
Maybe I'm overthinking, maybe readers won't be offended. It's just I've seen so much drama over literally nothing in fiction that I'm scared someday that bomb will explode on me π But I still choose to write my characters however I want because otherwise there would be no point in writing stories.
Comments
ctl032493
The trouble with Axel is that he has no clue what true love really is. He treats it like itβs a game and when he doesnβt win in the end then he acts like a spoiled child and throws a fit.
Deanna Bennett
Yes the slap. But now he going to cry to Lars. I hope Lars doesn't attack Yule
