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Chapter 64

🕑 Added 2025-01-20 15:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Tony

Thank you

Oponette

tftc!

Tony

Good point. I'll do another pass. Thank you.

Jason Hornbuckle

Nothing major, just a few things like how would they know everyone but Dan sprinted south. For all they know they're just standing behind Dan, right? Unless Dan turned to watch them go. I mean if they can see out his ear holes too that's fine with me, I was just asking

Tony

Thank you. I tried to be careful and only add what could be seen with normal sight or peripheral vision. I quickly read through again and couldn't find anything obvious. If there's something, please let me know. For instance, I'm editing the next chapter and Xotl had a few comments about stuff he couldn't have seen - the expression on Dan's face and things like that. EDIT: I fixed some parts that seemed like they could use clarification.

Tony

Thank you

Tony

Thank you

Actually

I love the back and forth and lore information he seems to be doing well fighting the champion Tyftc!

Eric Kellar

Really loving this chapter.

Jason Hornbuckle

if they're still only looking out of Dan's eyes how are they seeing the stuff off to the sides of him


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