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Chapter 52

🕑 Added 2024-12-23 14:50:49 +0000 UTC

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Tony

Thank you

Eric Kellar

really glad Leena was not actually a traitor and was just tricking him. Also super sad that so many of the main crew are dying off as heroes sacrificing themselves.

Tony

Yes. Thank you. Sorry about that. Fixing now.

Jason Hornbuckle

"That was Leena’s queue." In this case it's "cue"

Actually

I think it’s better now

tibbish

Yeah that is better, thanks!

Tony

Thank you. Yeah. I can’t disagree. I need to change that somehow. Let me work on it and see what I can come up with. EDIT: Fixed that part. I think this works much better. Let me know what you think please.

tibbish

Mostly a really good chapter but it seems a bit much that Hector got 'accidentally' saved by his rapee when he could've had his head bashed in solidly by 1 more hit. Just a lil' to twee IMO.

Tony

Thank you very much

John Anastacio

Wow. Didn't expect that. Multiple separate scenes of sacrifice in one chapter. Doesn't happen very often in any story. Thank you for the chapter.

Tony

Thank you

Tony

Thank you

Actually

Wow really emotional chapter I’m glad Lena was tricking hector. I worried about Becky and the kids now tyftc

The Human

Damn :(


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