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Chapter 54

🕑 Added 2024-12-27 15:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Tony

Thank you

Eric Kellar

Really liking acceso lablacky story telling this chapter had a little laugh when he made a joke about dan and Nick

Tony

Lol. And I definitely get your point about the meta-commentary not being well balanced or too rehashed. That was definitely a worry I had/have.

Tony

Thank you very much

Tony

Thank you

Bob Saget

Feels like a bit too much meta-commentary in this one, in proportion to how much there's been lately. Arguing about status update info timing, etc. It's very well-tread ground at this point. If we're going to repeatedly divert focus from the narrative, we should do so in a way that's fresh and inspiring. Like, say, serial interludes about Acesso LaBlacky's serial prison rape. We can title it 'blazing crack', get it?

John Anastacio

Good chapter, thank you. I loved and found very funny this part: Nick said to Dan, “You had me at hello.” Dan said, “You complete me.” Nick said, “I just can’t quit you,” and then they put their mouth orifices together and started kissing. That led to fornicating. Nick is pregnant now.

Actually

Fun catching up chapter Tyftc!


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