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🕑 Added 2022-09-23 17:34:38 +0000 UTC

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Jojiji18

This chapter got me to unsubscribe. Was really liking the story in the beginning but there is just to much angst and depression now. Not really what I was hoping for with a strong mc.

Pup Washington

Damn that almost made me cry

Robert

That seemed cruel and unnecessary to make her never allow to conceive again. Doesn’t serve a purpose for the plot. It’s not like Harry would be less furious and heartbroken when he found out that Tom did this, he murdered the child before it could be born. All you’re doing is breaking down Bellatrix for no reason, it’s like your trying to push her to madness. I don’t really like the turn this story has taken honestly. It started out good and since the cursed knife and MOD - it’s just adding pain for pains sake. There doesn’t always need to be some horrible traumatic thing that happens to the girls involved in Harry’s life. Narcissa was almost raped, then Andy was mind controlled/love potioned abused and raped and now Bellatrix, after almost losing herself to madness when Harry essentially died, just lost her child before it was born and can never give birth again. Just something to consider. It doesn’t make the story more emotional or intense it’s just piling on trauma at a certain point. I really hope you don’t do this in your other stories. Its frustrating as a reader for you to tear down these characters you spend so much time building up, adversity is good, but you’re making it permanent, tearing a piece of the character apart.


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