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Embers After Flames, Chapter 5.9

🕑 Added 2025-01-02 22:32:26 +0000 UTC

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Pyro Hawk

So the latest chapter on SB finally convinced me to come on here and start reading. Which lead me to this chapter and I have to say? It was absolutely great. But I had a tiny voice in the back of my head the entire time of that railgun strike that was saying: "You know what would really make the PCA's day horrible? What if there was for some unknown reason an undetected Coral reservoir under the Grid. One that just so happens to be susceptible to ignition from sufficient force applied to the structure above it, with said Coral Reservoir being more like a ground-to-orbit shaped charge than a normal explosion thanks in part to Coral's nature. I'm sure accidentally triggering a lesser Fires event will not cause the PCA any issues for 'merely' needing to blow up a Grid thanks to the main reactor being activated again." Which sure, might be too much of an environmental or collateral damage issue to allow. It's also absolutely bound to make the PCA flip into another setting. But can you just imagine the impact? Oh, also wanted to mention that the 'done running the PCA' -> 'ruining' typo is still there if you hadn't spotted. Not sure if you only edit for 'public release' or not.

Devin Ranaldi

So begins Allmind's investigation. This will one day lead to Allmind going to great lengths to get Drich to notice her.

V01D

An attack of that magnatude would likely cause heat bloom; effecting the climate

LegioN7

Title typo: Flams instead of Flames

ElricFlairgold

On one hand, ruining the PCA's day more is a good thing. On the other hand, giving ALLMIND a clue is... less of a good thing. For that matter, the PCA is probably going to have some extra questions after that as well. But I suppose Dritch wouldn't have done that without knowing those questions would arise.

Tango

A chapter with massive cataclysmic explosions, trolling, and motherly teasing, what a treat! Some small typo I noticed: I’d thought I was done running the PCA’s day! -> ruining

Joseph Cheung

ALLMIND is finally notice something fishy.

Red Wing

oooh, an early chapter!


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