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Embers After Flames, Chapter 6.2

🕑 Added 2025-01-15 06:19:10 +0000 UTC

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Robinton

As always, thanks for the update!!! --- > asides Besides? While I like the word, I don't think it's the right word in context. > Both were a completely different kind of death, but equally effective. Should probably be: Two completely different kinds of death, but equally effective. > Some of them weren’t; the ones that had been launched from the horizontal rails rather than the vertical ones, but their numbers had been significantly reduced regardless and so they were much less of a threat. I'd suggest either using two commas (instead of one semicolon and one comma) or using two dashes.

Soyvolon

Ah yes, the hours and hours of pain trying to beat this boss the first time around does have real life applications!

Gigifiy

Cue the PTSD flashbacks


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