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Embers After Flames, Chapter 6.3

🕑 Added 2025-01-17 07:23:40 +0000 UTC

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V01D

… Drich, your kids come into their mischievousness naturally, having inherited it from you! There’s a reason the ‘curse’ of “May your children be just like you” exists.

Robinton

Rescue mission successful! Welcome home, Ayre! --- > The manned machines were serving as local commanders, but the moment my Firekeepers had the opportunity, they had cut them down whichever ones were available. "They had cut them down" should probably lose the "them." > I was acutely aware of the ticking clock; running closer and closer to greater problems. Comma. > Scout went to the hangar that Belius had been in BALTEUS, as foreverman stated before me.

foreverman1991

Love the story. Just as a minor thing, after the defeat of BALTEUS and all the fire keepers split up to accomplish various different goals, Scout is mentioned as going to the hangar that Belius had come from. I assume that was probably supposed to be the hangar BALTEUS came from. Other then that it was great as usual!

Devin Ranaldi

Maybe Drich should make a better version of the ah17.

Matthew Lo

Thanks for the chapter! Now we just need Ayre to call C4-621 studmuffin.


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