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Embers After Flames, Chapter 7.1

🕑 Added 2025-02-10 13:28:08 +0000 UTC

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Siphon Rayzar

My money is the AC is Raven. The weapon setup is reminiscent of Raven's setup in the game. A reliable rifle on the right hand, a melee weapon on the left arm, missile launcher and a cannon setup on the back. With an economical AC parts setup. It fits. However, it's also possible that this is a completely new merc. We'll find out.

Pyro Hawk

Thanks for the chapter! That said, noticed this: ``` relatively straight light that was slightly off center``` I think you meant 'line' instead of 'light' here?

Elaine

good chappie

Robinton

Thanks for the chapter!!! --- > but outside of immediate territory double-space > Their path was steady, their velocity consistent, and preparations insufficient. Optional, but I'd suggest adding a third "their" before "preparations" for parallelism. > The rest were quickly catching on, flares firing the transports’ own weapons now beginning to fire back. I'm almost certain something isn't quite right in the second part of this sentence, but I'm not completely sure what. Should there be a comma between "firing" and "the"? Or a semicolon? Or is "flares firing" entirely unnecessary? I'm genuinely not sure.

CatBox

Anyone who manages to get to the vascular plant is gonna be in for a bad time when they get blasted by a buffed CEL-240, also im not sure if it was mentjoned before but does she have access to SOL-644? Cause that would turn at least the corps from capybaras vs wild cat, into coughing baby vs nuclear fallout

Decim

All native Rubicon parts and guns? Whoever the cheeky fucker is, they're being as blatant as can be about staying incognito. Could be literally anyone who got a hold of that AC. The obvious candidate is Raven, as they did something similar with NIGHTFALL, using RAD parts for the AC. But by no means is that definitive.

Devin Ranaldi

The most valuable thing on Rubricon for an independent merc, at this time, is not actually Coral. It's the C6 augmentations.

FirstKingofthePotatoes

The Sea Spider makes me so hyped for CEL-240 to be used in the future.

Tango

Somehow, I feel like that's Raven, who had much the same idea of ambushing this force.


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