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Trio comic

🕑 Added 2016-06-28 22:02:01 +0000 UTC

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Hola

Can't miss that!

Karbo

Thank you ! I'm glad you like it :D

Spacemoustik

This comic is amazing! Good job man! Need more ah ah! Can't wait for the HD version of it!

Karbo

haha I'm not sure about that but I try ! XD Thank you ^_^

Karbo

hehe glad you liked it XP well yes it had to be done X3

Karbo

hehe I'm very glad you like the final result ! ;D

Karbo

Thanks ;D To be fair it's really almost 100% finished. I have some little things I want to finalize but that can be counted on the fingers of the hand :3

PrinnyDood

Well, I have to say it's pretty damn glorious at 99.5% finished! I love just about everything about this, from the three ladies themselves to the yuri and the marvelous squishiness of the internals. For some reason I'm especially fond of that bit with Melany looking up between Vivian's breasts, with her tongue slightly out. So cute! x3 Anyway, bravo and congratulations on creating some of the sexiest voreness the world has ever known. :3

Ichiro Houkou

Hot damn, that was an exciting read :D It's nice to see the Felarya girls getting primal and intimate like that o///o I've always wondered whats been going on behind Vivians closed curtains. Thank you so much for showing us! I hope we get to see more like this!

turboman500

ABSOLUTELY STUNNING! To put it shortly. I think it turned out to be amazing - despite you wanting to tweek it more :P. I also like the tad dark touch you added with the last one getting in looking for her friends., only to see the last of a puddle and no trace.

PickledHotDog

Haha! Hopefully she didn't wake the others with her gassy eruption! XD

JohnboyX

Horniness reaching a new height (see the red blushes) on three extremely HOOOOOT giant Felaryan beauties who playfully bring erotism to its fullest, even more stomach sounds, additional inside views to further intensify the struggle Melany's preys have in her belly, saliva on mass, rich, deep and varied colors, sensual writing that just drags you into the scene (yes Vivian's hypnotism is that strong ^^ ) and the list goes on. This is perfection perfected. I loooooooove this comic so much ^_^. THANKS MAN ;-) !!!!!!!!

Karbo

Thank you ! :3

Karbo

Thank you :D Well to be honest, not that much ^^ but on top of my head : draw better the very last panel of the last page, add some more reflects and slight transparency on Melany's wings, change some shadows here and there, finalize a bit more the mouth interior page 4 and that would be it I think :)

Karbo

aw thanks XD

Karbo

Thank you ! yes I agree the sounds adds a lot in a vore comic, it just make the scene more immersive I think :)

Karbo

hehe I think you are going to like it ;D

Karbo

Thank you :) Well the page are in essence the same save for some panels added but I put a lot more reflects here and there and it's always a great way to make the volumes pops out :3 ( which is really important in a vore comic ! )

Karbo

Thank you ;D

Karbo

Just Melany, the others two are already asleep XP

Meddwynn Ravencroft

That was very hot! ^.^;

coredumperror

Amazing. Simply amazing.

The detail in this makes me glad I support you here. The interior shots are simply lovely, as are the closeups of each of the girls. It'd be interesting to see what you end up tweaking between this release and the final version, as well

separation

excellent！

PickledHotDog

All the little added details are great! Love the comic. One question though, who is burping at the end? Is it all three of them burping or just Melany giving one big burp?

nostromo

Wow! You've added a lot of nice little touches to the original. All this works close to perfection. Loved the sound effects as i always imagined the inner voyage to be a rather noisy affair :-) Superlative!