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Succubi at work graphic novel project
🕑 Added 2016-09-19 15:07:32 +0000 UTC Let's talk more about that project of illustrating the Succubi at work story :3 A lot of you seemed to like the idea and it definitely has the potential to be a really cool project I think :)So quick recap : quite a long time ago I wrote a vore story ^^ My first and only writing in english to be precise ! ( it was really interesting to do but also really long as I'm not really a natural writer )
http://aryion.com/g4/view/17472
And this was more or less how Menyssan came to life ;) ( contrary to what most people believe, she was actually my very first character, Crisis came after :3 . So it carries some additional significance to me.
If you read the story, I am curious to know. Let's say you have 5 to 7 moments to pick that you would like to see illustrated which would they be ? :3
I plan to make something like a dozen of illustrations for it. With all the tricks I learned those last few years in painting I think that could really lead to an exciting and cool project :)
So please go ahead !
Comments
Karbo
haha don't tell me dude ^^;
PrinnyDood
. . . I can't decide! I'll just be super unhelpful and let you & the others sort it out. xD Also, I just noticed it says that was posted 10 years ago. Time really does fly, huh?
Karbo
hehe alright, thank you for the suggestion, those are nice picks :D
Karbo
Alright it's noted ;3 you picked some good choices here in term of rhythm ^^
Karbo
XP
Karbo
hehe X3
Karbo
ok XD
He wants to make a new comic out of it ;)
Jimmypootron
As long as the first vore scene is in there I am happy
Hola
that picture was ages ago... so you are still planning to work on it?
Ailith
The story has some wonderful imagery. I especially enjoyed Menyssan rippling her stomach to unsteady her meal. That was very stimulating! π
turboman500
I don't care how you do it... but you need to do it >.>
JohnboyX
Ok my picks: 1. Demon moving Sardon towards the hall with the 3 giant succubi with his pitchfork, 2. Unknown giant succubi playing a game of "tug of war " between her oesophagus and her hand with one of the prisoners, 3. Sardon first meeting Menyssan lying in her soft palm as she examines him, 4. Menyssan placing Sardon on her swollen belly making him listen to the cries of those being digested alive, 5. Menyssan holding Sardon above her saliva build-up mouth with her long tongue sticking out (a tiny prisoner inside is holding for his life onto her uvula), 6. Menyssan swallowing Sardon, 7. Sardon is shown inside the belly of Menyssan along with the other prisoners she ate.
IΒ΄ll just write down which passages I think are the best from the story and then add a comment at the end. Number One: The prisoner in her hand was given a full view of the moist, red cavern in front of him during the process, and he began to thrash and kick wildly in her grasp. The demoness smiled innocently. "You don't enjoy the view, mortal ?" Number Two: She was more than ready for him, her huge legs spread wide apart, nonchalantly exposing her broad, pink slit; judging by her dripping vulva, the girl was enjoying herself immensely. Number Three: The man became mad with terror, staring as the inexorably approaching abyss filled his vision with its moist, humid depths. Little by little, he was lowered past her lips, dipped all the way inside. The descent stopped for a moment to give him plenty of time to gaze into the back of her mouth... Number Four: The succubus held Sardon there for a moment, savoring his fear and the desperate struggle of the man in her throat, her cheeks flushed slightly from her intense delight. And for the Number Five: The final scene where Menyssan is taunting and teasing her victims inside her belly. What I think would turn out very great is if they could hear her inside the belly and react with fear and so on ( like it would probably be in "real life" I guess ) Those were my favourite parts of the story. Add some gurgle sounds there, some nice burps and smirk faces here, spice it up with some teasing and demonic glee and you got yourself a pretty nice comic I think :)
