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Ideas for the Patreon comic : time to vote !
🕑 Added 2017-01-05 16:02:46 +0000 UTC Phew it took me really long to decide on this one ! I was very amazed by the number of ideas you guys submitted ( were talking about several dozens ! o.o ) And many of them were really good ! Thank you ^_^In the end, after reading and re-reading the whole list several times, I decided based on a mix of a couple things : of course on how interesting the idea is and how inspiring it is to me, but also on how it would look as a comic and if there is enough material to go on several pages :3
So here are the ideas I selected, with my thoughts on it :
1 ) Nagas, adventurers and an hungry slug-girl :
This one based is based on several suggestions ^^ It would be a bit like the anticipation strip ( https://www.patreon.com/posts/anticipation-5415259 ) but turned into an actual comic :3
A group of adventurers and their two naga guides somehow get caught in a sticky trail left by a slug girl. they struggle and panic to free themselves from it before something big find them. Some of them would manage it by discarding items of clothing but some would stay stuck as they watch Pipril slowly approach ! Lot of vore ensues X3
In term of vore I think this one is really interesting because it would play a lot on anticipation as the slug girl close on them and then take her sweet time slurping them one by one, while the remaining ones watch in horror their companions getting gulped down. There would be some nagas getting eaten spaghetti style as well as Pipril is pretty adept at swallowing them despite their long tail ( Personally the « slurping » scenario is one I like a lot in vore ! ), sticky spit to catch a prey running, some teasing and noisy digestion. It would clearly focus a lot on the swallowing, with a lot of inside shots.
And maybe in the end "the one that got away" scenario with one member of the group having escaped Pipril only to become stuck in another sticky trail. Then maybe an ironic end with just a passing fairy walking by, spotting the survivor, plucking them and eating them before wandering off XP
2) The meeting of Crisis and Lea
Now fore some Felaryan History ! Those two met when Lea was a slave and was being transferred from one world to another, with a brief passage through Felarya. That was the plan anyway. However a wild Crisis appeared, overcame the caravans rather unprepared defenses and started to devour everyone left and right. She spared Lea though, at first entranced by her voice, then interested by her as a person wen she heard her story.
Its been really long I didnt do a comic with those two and its a moment of Felaryan history :) I can imagine some really interesting and moving dialog between the two, as well as some views of Balfrezagg, Leas native place ^^ But also quite a lot of vore with Crisis gorging herself on the caravan of course X3
Overall I feel this idea represents a good balance :)
3) Traditional giantess rampage !
Several of you have suggested me to do some more « classical giantess » :)
This idea is more about the setting than the actual story ( at least for now in my mind ) . It would be all about « classical giantess » with a giantess ( or more ) rampaging through a modern city. Lot of playful destruction ensue with a very monster movie feel to it except.. well instead of Godzilla you have a lovely giant lady doing it XP
Obviously it would be a very visual type of comic, with a lot of panels playing on the sheer gigantism of the giantess, perspective shots etc.. in order to make the reader feels theyre really here and also to convey theyre really small !
Among some of the scenes I imagine could be happening, there is one where the giantess holds a bus above her mouth and shake it to make its occupants fall in her maw. I know this scene remains a big favorite among macrophiles ;3
Is the giantess coming from space as a scout for an invasion force maybe ? Or was she enlarged as some kind of new experimental weapon program and something went horribly wrong ? Maybe theres a hero trying to stop the giantess by climbing on her and trying to get to her, or trying to fix some mind-controlling device ? I dont know, but there are certainly a ton of possibilities and fun things to do here ! XP
4) The slumbering giantess :
The theme of unaware vore is one that come back often in what people suggest me and this comic could be an occasion to do just that :3 This one is quite similar to one of the entry in the last Patreon comic poll and to a sketch I did a while ago : https://www.patreon.com/posts/sleeping-and-6655616
As I see it two humans ( or tinies ? ) are running through the jungle ( maybe fleeing some threat chasing after them ). They arrive at a gap with a giant Temi ( ? ) sleeping underneath. The first one jumps across it. The second then try but somehow fall on Temi's mouth ! I can imagine the prey panicked efforts to get out as Temi's mouth open on its own to take them in. The first human would try to lower themselves to the mouth ( maybe by holding a vine ) to haul up their trapped friend, only to eventually watch them getting swallowed by the sleeping fairy. Then the first one try to get back up to safety but fall in Temi's mouth as well ( maybe Temi burps in her sleep and cause them to lose their purchase ? )
This one would be very visual, showing a lot of inside mouth shots obviously and the frantic efforts of the prey to escape the mouth. This would be a very « biological » type of vore as well. No teasing here, its just Temis body functioning on its own ! Which in term of vore scenario is pretty fascinating too XP
5) The cursed relic :
A group of adventurers have gone out to find a certain object or relic, only to find out that when they get their hands on said object it shrinks them!
Now the startled party have to find a way back through a route home that has become 100x more dangerous due to a certain size reduction. Just making their way back to the entrance of the temple would be a journey in itself, when simple cracks on the floor have become menacing pits and all sort of items are now obstacles or walls. Not to mention they left one of the member of their group at the entrance ( For some reasons Im imagining a shy, introverted female neko ). Who was too afraid / sick to enter ? And now that they are tiny they are slowly realizing shes now a predator? ( especially if they mistreated her before ) Or maybe instead of a member of the group she is the guardian of the place ?
The idea is still to be developed in term of scenario but it would play a lot on the shrinking and the perspective you have on the world when you are small, and it would also focus much more on the prey perspective too :)
6) Hell trials :
Another mix between several of your ideas :3 In this one, Chalyss ( she is by far the most likely pred to do this ) has gotten her hand and on a bunch of tinies and make them compete in various sort of ways ( asking them riddles or/and physical challenge ), promising to let the winners out and eat the losers. There would be a lot of teasing Chalyss-style like you can imagine as you know how much she enjoys it X3
The culminating scene in my head would be that of a maybe some sort of makeshift bridge, with Chalyss under it, mouth wide open, and two challengers brawling and attempting to throw their opponent in the pit. (and maybe Chalyss burping intermittently from the ones she already ate, to « motivate them ! ). A sort of Felaryan version of the Sarlacc pit scene XD
It could be also a nice occasion to show a bit more in details what life for the survivors looks like in the library, with maybe day to day stuff like hunting small creatures living there. I imagine some kind of possible ironic end as well with the winner being released by Chalyss but maybe getting picked up by Ashmet who was passing by as they exit the room ?
Well thats it ^^
So It's now time to vote ;3
IMPORTANT :
Please put the all six ideas in the decreasing order you prefer them ( the last being the one you'd least wish to see )
This way we can do a preferential voting system where the '1' votes are tallied up, and the option with the lowest percentage of votes is eliminated. From the people who voted on the eliminated option, their '2' votes are then taken and added to the votes of the surviving options, and it continues until one option has greater than 50% of the total votes.
Also keep in mind those are base and rough ideas. Once one of them is selected, I'm going to work closely with you guys and ask your opinion to refine it ;3 This means it coud change and evolve quite a lot !
Also I'm not entirely sure yet but rather than making a long ( 20 + pages ) comic, maybe make two medium ones insteads ? We'll see, I'm still thinking on that ^^
Comments
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Julian Travaglia
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Ernst Undesser
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Homer4hire247
1, 4, 3, 5, 6, 2
Toast Baron
542613
Well, there are several interesting choices. Still, instead of following my desire for vore this time, my vote goes to Crisis' and Lea's meeting. I love those two!
165432
4,5,3,2,1,6
Triskelion
6,1,2,4,5,3
6 5 2 4 3 1
6.5.3.1.2.4
Jimmypootron
These are all fantastic ideas!! My order goes 5,1,3,6,2,4, I think for 5 the Neko should be changed for slug girl, it would be a nice combo to still see some slug girl vore but just with a smaller slug girl :) also I feel if number 3 wins that the alien scenario would play best but the aliens must look alien ;) other than that many thanks for considering my ideas :)
Karbo
Can you indicate your order of preference for the five others please ? :3
Karbo
Can you indicate your order of preference for the five others please ? :3
Scott Miller
4,3,5,1,2,6
Lime Siren
3, 2, 5, 6, 1, 5.
5,4,1,2,6,3
RoTheHuman
4 3 1 5 2 6
turboman500
Wow, all of these are realy good! It's actually hard to pick :( but here goes - 6, 5, 2, 3, 1, 4
Davo
1,5,2,6,3,4
3, 4,1,5,2,6
3,4,5,6,2,1
ZaneofBane
5,4,6,3,1,2
Cable
5,4,1,2,3,6
Doc
Throw my hat in for 3,4,5,1,6,2 Gotta go for that rare opportunity to see how you'd handle the rampage!
dzutte
6,5,4,1,2,3
PickledHotDog
2,3,4,6,1,5
Dekkard
1
4
4, 6, 1, 3, 5, 2
Franz Hässler
1,5,6,4,2,3
1,5,2,6,4,3 . I love the idea with a shy neko, maybe they maked fun of her and left here as a joke behind. TIME FOR THE SHY REVANCHE.
Asuroth
Tough choices heh- but I gotta vote for 2, 1, 5, 4, 6, 3
5,1,4,6,2,3, methinks. The dynamic you've described with the shy, scared neko girl that suddenly becomes empowered is one of my favorite fantasies. :3 Then again, the mouth play, and anticipation sounds just as tantalizing. And of course we can always do with more Chalyss. This is a very difficult vote xD However, I'm not worried, because I know whatever wins is going to be a masterpiece. :)
MadameMaeve
4,6,3,5,2,1 yeh
PrinnyDood
1, 2, 3, 6, 5, 4 I'm obviously somewhat biased towards 1, but all of these sound like a lot of fun, so I'll be quite thrilled to see whatever ends up winning. :3
6, 4, 2, 1, 5, 3 Just can´t get enough of Chalyss <3
Life-Saver
1 6 3 4 5 2
Life-Saver
nagas, adventurers, and hungry slug girl. +stomac Transparency?
3, 6, 5, 1, 4, 2
1, 6, 3, 4, 5, 2
ASKDV
4, 5, 3, 1, 6, 2
HunterGarou
3, 5, 4, 6, 1, 2
4, 5, 3, 2,1,6
AndurilWielder
2 or 6
Woeirnoginds
1, 5, 6, 2, 3, 4 :). Looking forward to whatever you choose, you rock man.
Nick2802
1,3,4,5,2,6
Vision
1, 5, 6, 2, 3, 4.
Hans
1,4,6,2,3,5
4,6,5,2,3,1
2,3,4,1,5,6 just a little tired of hell as an setting. With the place taking up the last two major comics and a succubus at work on the way I think it would be nice for a break.
Enigmatic Jester
6, 4, 5, 2, 3, 1.
DarenGC
2,1,3,4,5,6
4, 5, 2, 6, 3, 1
1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 4
purpledenmark
3, 4, 5, 6, 2, 1 i would not mind two shorter comics if it ends up working out better for you.
3 all the way
Bitter
1, 6, 2
JohnboyX
Ohh man ^^; deciding on an order of choice was not that easy since all ideas are really good :-) . Anyway here goes °_^: 5,4,2,6,1,3
vbk345
5 6 1 4 3 2
Sebastian Welz
6,1,5,4,2,3 is my voting
Feedfancier
2! hands down! also 2 4 3 5 6 1
Karbo
can you vote for the rest as well though please ? ^^;
Chaotic Sloth
4 3 5 6 2 1. But in a way I kind of want them all to be done haha
Vixsune (ThatSlyFox)
I'm voting for just 5, I like the whole idea of its concept. Edit: 5,2,3,4,6,1
I think both story and material wise it my preference would be: 2 1 4 5 3 6 I really like the world you have set up, and feel that both option 2 and 1 would really show off your particular flavor and style very well. Seeing more of the world, especially with familiar characters is great. And the way you integrate the history with the action in idea 2, to me, seems like it would flow really well. As for 1 i think the scenario would work really well and it has a certain balance between horror and the happy anticipation perspectives. The rest of the vote is just personal preference. =P
Rem Buchard
Speaking from my preference...6,4,2,3,5,1
AngelicChaos
I'm going to say... 2 6 4 3 1 5
