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Iridan's dance last page WIP

🕑 Added 2017-05-29 11:39:41 +0000 UTC

Comments

Karbo

Thanks ! :)

PrinnyDood

I've said it before, but I just adore this sequence! :3 I think I like the first one best, since I'm a sucker for cool, vertigo-inducing angles and that sort of stuff.

Triskelion

I always love a good burp ending to vore too! :D I think I prefer the second one, but the first does fit well with the whole idea of the prey flying around that is present in the comic. Both are great though!

Shes so happy =) Very cute (and hot) :3

Ehren

Second angle

Sleepingcats

First one. Iridan has to be my favorite of all preds XD

Konton454

Second one

Vixsune (ThatSlyFox)

O.0 ANOTHER PAGE! And is she sleeping!? How does control power while sleeping? Id hate fir them to be flung and fall to their deaths, much wast. I think First side gives a great perspective of the privileged flying around her. But PAGE two feels more natural for the comic and make better phone background >.>. Im rooting for #2 but Either way both will look nice.

I would go with the first one for the big picture but use the smaller panel from the second one together. I think that would look the best.

Doc

Go for something novel and experiment. The first one

Homer4hire247

I would say if the comic used more angles like the first one to give of sense of vertigo, then you should have gone with that, but since there really only one other time that sort of angle does happen(final panel page 3), I'm gonna say go with the second one since that feels more consistent with the panels.