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Felarya tour flat color WIP

🕑 Added 2017-09-04 21:48:55 +0000 UTC

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Karbo

I wouldn't mind it myself XP it's the stomach that comes after that could be a bit problematic ^^

Karbo

Oh it's a drop but there is squishy material all around you to aleviate it XD

Karbo

you came up with a really long list so I think so yes :)

Karbo

nice name :)

Karbo

thank you ! glad you like it :D

Agora

Don't feel pressured, I just figured I'd voice out one of my rare nitpicks :D

Karbo

up to a lot of debate XD if I had to chose I think I have a weakness for Subeta ^^

Karbo

I know right ! XD

Karbo

alright I'm noting this and I'll see what I can do about it in the final version :)

PrinnyDood

Looks great! Felaryan 'tours' are a longstanding tradition, and you'd be amazing how many natives are happy to take time out of their day to provide them. Such a friendly place! x3

Agora

You know what, I think I liked the original B&W's last panel better. Her eyes seemed better oriented at her stomach, her lips' curves were cuter for some reason, too! The uvula shot and burp in that panel feel superfluous, as well, and I actually liked the simpleness of no stomach shot to leave it to the imagination, but that's just because I don't care for stomach shots, I think : P

JohnboyX

Really really good :-) . Apart from the adjustments/additions you wanted to make yourself this only needs a bit more detail on the human in the fairies mouth so you can better make out that the prey is a girl (maybe by revealing more like with the prey in Melany's mouth in "Trapper and prey" for example her chest if that is still possible) with the inclusion of a saliva string directly hitting her and then it's perfect (in my opinion) . Fabulous work so far °__^.

GizmoChinasa

Awesome! I need a tour sometime! :3 I'd prefer a long visit to the gullet exhibit! x3

Doc

But who is the best tour guide in all of felarya?

Nikern

Uhuhuhu <3 *.*

Karbo

God catch ! you are right :)

Ehren

Oh, the internal view is new, I like it! Can I recommend making the flower in her hair a bit more of a noticeably different hue of blue than her hair? I think it's just a tiny bit too close right now. Then again, it's a WIP, so maybe you were planning to do that anyway.

this is hot!