Karbo
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So close..
🕑 Added 2018-11-27 16:19:48 +0000 UTC Elorie's mouth X3 In the inked pages of the cursed relic comic, I'm going to do a full page mawshot to convey just how terrifying Filia's position is, having to climb into Elorie's mouth while she's asleep to go get the rope.. Just a short trip but that could easily turn into a much, much longer one..I also tried to convey a slow, sleeping breathing with those onomatopoeia but I'm not sure they're the best for that situation. What do you think ? :3
EDIT : Argh.. I can't believe it.. Just now I missclicked on a windows to close it and accidentally closed the PSD file instead in a flattened state. And... well it saved it. Which means the picture is now unusable ( as it has now only one layer ) and I will have to do it again. What a bummer :/
EDIT2 : Ok it's not THAT bad.. using levels I managed to make a version where i essentially made the picture super bright in order to remove the grey at a cost of some details. it's still going to need some rework but it's certainly better than having to restart entirely from scratch..
Comments
Karbo
Yes it will be free once finished :3
Karbo
oh that's a good idea :)
Karbo
yeah the uhff may not works that well ^^
Vivians-number-1-fan
I'm still super confused why there is a gourd on a rope...
Karbo
A gourd actually ^^
Karbo
haha true XP
PickledHotDog
Need to watch out for those surprise burps at this distance. XD
Inaba5cm
Very good Jiuchi ... I want to be exposed to BLRP from the back of my throat as it is!
If I remember correctly he said that it is going to be free when finished.
Devilnaga
That is a beautiful Neko mouth. You really think about it you don't have many human size preds. Most of your preds are of the giant kind. Its great to see, some tinies getting gobbled up. I like that we are getting the ability to see the progress of this comic here, will you be adding any kind of extras in the comic that will only been seen by the people that buy it?
Doc
Daaaang the end of the rope is so close to her throat there. I love everything about the implications here.
Homer4hire247
Maw shot looks fantastic! As for your use onomatopoeia, I don't think the ones you choose are bad but, to me it sorta hard to show slow breathing unless you do multiple pages showing the inhaling and exhaling with suttle differences like slavia moving forward and backward. But that sounds a little to much... Maybe draw this page with just an inhale happening and the next page showing Filia's hair moving with an exhale while they are looking into her mouth?
Vixsune (ThatSlyFox)
Mmm love a good mawshot! Wouldnt catch me trying to get the rope, send in someone else lol The bottom bubble gave the sense if you looked over as she exhaled, blowing your hair back not sure on the top bubble but it is like 7am and I just woke up so..could be that.
Vivians-number-1-fan
Is that a landmine on a rope?
