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Cursed relic inked pages 13-24
🕑 Added 2018-09-23 11:56:34 +0000 UTChere are the 12 next inked pages of the Cursed relic comic :)
There is no text for the moment and the pagemaking is pretty straightforward as you can see. One of the real important step in making a comic is to take all panels and give them a hierarchy by deciding which are on top of others or giving them additional length or even changing shapes.. When I get to this phase I will make a tutorial for it :3
Also I added a new page here, describing more the climbing process that was just a little too fast as many of you pointed. Don't hesitate if you have any remarks and critiques !
Also I will soon put the poll for you to vote on the middle-size project I should do next ;3
Comments
Karbo
Merci :D Et oui je suis tout à fait d'accord, je ne pense pas me lancer dans un autre gros projet avant d'avoir fini celui là et je vais me concentrer plus dessus ^^
Karbo
hehe glad you liked the changes ;D
Croki
Très bon travail. Je pense que tu devrais finir ce comic avant de te lancer dans d'autres projets : cela fait un bon moment que tu n'as pas fait de comic (2015? 3 ans?). Personnellement, c'est ça qui m'a attiré et c'est aussi cela que je retiendrai de toi en tant qu'artiste. Tu as créé un personnage attachant et "non prédateur" je pense que tu trouveras plusieurs suite à cette histoire. J'ai pas mal d'idées de mon côté aussi, au besoin ;-)
JohnboyX
LOVE the update :-) !!! Sense of scale is amazing :O , Elorie looks cute as hell and that boob catapult part is just *LOL* :D XD . Especially looking forward to the pages with stomach cutaway views (maybe even add one on page 19 first big panel on the left where she coughs ? ) . Keep up the good work °__^ .
Karbo
Thanks ^_^
Karbo
Thank you :D
Karbo
Alright, thanks for the remark :3
Karbo
Thank you :)
Seraphy
Im getting deja vu cause i seen these pieces before with the written dialogues
Classical Salamander
An accidental swallowing... how odd, yet fun! I do hope she escapes... or not, it's all good in Felarya, and we all get digested some time.
Signe (dcvfgb1234)
Looks absolutely amazing!
David Dent
The accidental swallowing and side entry to the stomach look even more fantastic now in ink!
Homer4hire247
These look really fantastic, I love Elorie expression on page 20, also the re-swallowing scene. If there any critique to give, I would say the way Elorie looks while she passing out on pages 21-21. It sorta looks... off? IDK, it feels like she just falling asleep not passing out from her her head spinning. But other whys this all shaping up really well keep up the great work!
great work as always
