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Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22

🕑 Added 2022-10-03 12:07:07 +0000 UTC
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22
Small preview and Dev update 03-10-22

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Huw Gryffin

One last thing. Write what you think the scene or story merits. You'll never get a definitive answer from a crowd for as "they" say you can't please everyone all the time. Give us your best and then those for whom it is really important or who are prepared to offer their input or advice to help will feedback to you. For me, the text should tell you something the render doesn't. Text or dialogue should never describe or repeat something the render is already showing or about to show. It seems to me that "Dialogue" is not only a conveyor of information not otherwise available to the audience, but also a very, very useful and important aid in characterisation. Not only does it help establish the character's position in the scene or situation, but also helps form and stylize the personality behind everything the character says. The way that character perceives the situation and others around him/her, the way he/she conducts him/herself, addresses and responds and the information their dialogue conveys literally "speaks" volumes about who and what kind of personality nestles within that human shell. It conveys intelligence level, their concerns and their own, self-perceived role and their perception of others' roles in proceedings too. If your story is strong enough, the scenes and who they involve and the respective roles of the people involved automatically create an environment in which the dialogue of the characters involved, in accordance with already established or developing character, personality and their inter-personal relationship to each other, should pretty much write itself.

Huw Gryffin

This all looks brilliant!! and whilst I, like everyone else, can't wait for the next release, you need to go ahead and enjoy your Life outside. This surely has to be, for all of us I think, very much a secondary consideration compared to our own real Life. If it isn't, then we are perhaps in some trouble, aren't we? So, enjoy your life and your festivals wherever in the world you may be and then when the season is over and things settle down once more, return refreshed to give this your all again with no regrets of wonderful memories lost through unnecessary sacrifices made. We can all wait, primarily because, of course, we have no choice, but more importantly we can wait out of consideration and respect for you and the priorities of you and your loved ones in your own life. For me, "The Lost Love" and all the other creations I am fortunate enough to be able to help support a little bit through Patreon, form a nice big layer of icing on the cake of my Life (and no, I'm lucky, I don't live alone or without love or anything). These entertainments are all most enjoyable experiences and I feel privileged to be included amongst my fellow devotees of "The Lost Love" and all other wonderfully imaginative, utterly enjoyable, richly heart-warming and at times, in all meanings of the word, marvellously "intimate", story.


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