Karbo
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The last treat
🕑 Added 2020-04-18 19:29:39 +0000 UTCWhat was once a busy, active and noisy street was now completely empty, The only audible activity were the loud, intermittent gurgles and groans coming from within the belly of the enormous giantess lying in the middle of the street, entirely naked.
You recognized her as a local schoolgirl bully, who apparently grew to a giant size for terrible and unexplained reasons, along with several of her gang who, according to rumors, were now rampaging through the city, catching and eating people alive !
The giant girl had come across the street, strolling with a big grin, and quickly proceeded to pick up and eat every single passerby she found, her throat gulping again and again, sending them one after another, thrashing within her large stomach. After the gruesome feast, she had lied in the middle of the deserted street, her belly apparently very full, if the thunderous belch she let out was of any indication.
From your hiding point you watched as the giantess was preparing to take a nap. However a clumsy gesture from you made a nearby metal pipe fall to the ground, with a terribly loud CLANG. The giantess' eyes opened and saw you. In one quick motion you were captured !
She didn't even talk to you. She just smiled dreamily with a sleepy and contented look on her face then lazily opened her imposing mouth. Another loud burp escaped from her throat as you were brought closer and closer.
Now staring at her large bright pink mouth and the dark gullet twitching in anticipation in the back, you fully realize you are going to be gobbled up by this giant girl ! As a small last treat, before she finally falls into slumber in order to digest the mass of dozens of squirming people trapped in her stomach, that you are just about to join. If only you could have stayed silent for a few more minutes...
Well that's the little scenario I had in my head when I started coloring :D Forgive the clumsy writing, English is not my prime language ! I wanted to try a Ganguro type of girl here, rather gaudy and vain. I thought it was fitting ^^
Comments
Valky13111
C'est vraiment cool ;)
PG
Will we ever see the reverse POV of this? I remember there being a sketch of this scene from her perspective...
Nick2802
The most casual ending of a life ever. It makes zero difference to her
Karbo
Merci ! :D
Karbo
hehe probably yeah XD
Zachary Lavigne
This looks inviting! Comme d'habitude c'est du travail incomparables! J'adore!
Karbo
Hehe thank you, I'll try to do that more often :)
Toast Baron
English may not be your first language, but that didn't stop you from writing a fantastic companion piece to an already great piece of artwork! I love short stories like this that add the context to really bring the scenario to life.
Karbo
well who knows? I can tell she did quite an impression on people XD
Karbo
hehe thank you ;D
Karbo
Yup that's her :)
Karbo
Thank you ! and yes I'll definitely try that again for pictures in the future :)
Karbo
Thank you :)
Karbo
I'm pretty sure i will draw one :D
Karbo
thanks XD
Karbo
haha XD
Vivians-number-1-fan
XD
Vivians-number-1-fan
So is this the punishment for breaking quarantine?
Karbo
hehe X3
Karbo
Thank you :D
Karbo
j'ai fait ça comme ça, sans y penser mais je pense que je devrais essayer plus souvent XD
Karbo
Thank you :D
Karbo
Je pense que je vais en faire une comme ça ^^
Karbo
;3
Karbo
hehe thank you :D
cousarmy0001
Your writing was adequate. I give you an A- :-) Although that might not mean anything to a European, so... 92%?
turboman500
There's something about this one that is on a completely different level than other similar pics. I think there's an element of realism here that's apart from what we normally see. The scenario you wrote definitely makes that part pop. You may be onto something brilliant for the next time you decide to do a completely vore focused comic even. Could be VERY interesting to see an expanded version of that scenario as a full comic. She looks like the kind that can get very... creative... with her meals.
McBiscuit
Damn that's hot. Wouldn't mind a comic with her!
PrinnyDood
This is great! Love the premise/design of the gaudy, vain schoolgirls mysteriously turned huge and voracious. :3 No cause to apologize dude: your English is pretty close to perfect, and your prose here was excellent, in my opinion. :D
Karbo
Haha thanks, maybe I'll try that again some days :D and I'll definitely try to do more of these short stories as descriptions in order to set the mood for a picture ^^
Karbo
Thank you :D
Chinnsyn
If this and the other things of yours I've read are any indication your English is on par with anyone else's. This is the girl from those reverse POV pictures you did, yeah? And damn, wouldn't I just know it, a girl like this that ends me!
Karbo
;3
Karbo
Thank you :D
Karbo
hehe I'll try that then, it gives more context to a picture :D
Fizzisop
Fantastic short story! Knowing the frustration the prey must've been feeling before being eaten, and the nonchalant nature of the pred makes the pic even better. Would love you to write some more of those in the future, and ganguros are perfect as vore preds imo. Great job!
PG
I really dig her tongue stud! Are you planning on coloring in the other pic of her as well? If so, might I suggest giving her a pierced belly button?
YaltaNev
These scenarios are top notch. I'd love to read more.
giantessvideo
Good, nostril flaring !!
Owen
Sequel PLEASE. I NEED IT.
Nick2802
this is one of your best and the accompanying story adds great context.
Wow! Amazing long uvula, perfect for hold on it before beeing swallowed :P
PG
I think your English is fine! I enjoyed the story and the picture. :D
Taiki Sensei
Cool, le texte, pour accompagner :3
gwadahunter2222
Je sens le début d'une série de nouveau personnages qui sait. J'aurai voulu voir son corps entier à cet instant
AdamH1212
Mate your writing is better than many people who have English as their first language, so as far as I'm concerned great job (9/10). I will say tho I am a bit biased because idk why but these types of girls in this situation are one of my favorite.
Agora
Nice little write-up, really helps set the mood!
Homer4hire247
Your writing in English is actually pretty okay! It was nice and shirt to the point =3 As for the picture the giantess has a really cute design, wouldn't mind being eaten by her X3
JohnboyX
Bro you should try yourself on writing vore stories more often :O (succubi at work writing was also excellent). I see a lot of talent there as well °__^
Blue
Yes story is very nice yes
Love it! I really like the story too <3
Dovah
Love the story
McKay
Oh wow you should write these scenarios more often 😳
