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178 - The Revenant King Pt. 2 [Sturmblitz]

🕑 Added 2023-02-12 21:39:12 +0000 UTC

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Akaso Industries

The black-robed brother IS easily angered and generally prickly. I'll make some edits to 179 to flesh out the exchange, though. As for the Revenant King's "Zone of Absolute Truth", I didn't want to inflate the wordcount by recapping a bunch of stuff.

Marble

The Revenant king's truth ability is cool. I honestly would have liked to hear Zelsys story in boria with that added clarity. The brother in black feels like a temperamental idiot. A child throwing tantrum after tantrum, is that your intention? As always I enjoyed your work, and look forward to wednesday.

Akaso Industries

shit, fixed

Joshy14-06

"REWRITE THIS - ELDARTHA WAS USED TO FORGE THE ARMS WITH WHICH ANCIENT MAN HUNTED THE LAST OF THE GODS" Are you sure that was still suposed to be there?


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