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65 - Re: Slaughterhouse 9 Pt. 2 [Cherno]

🕑 Added 2023-05-17 20:28:52 +0000 UTC

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Akaso Industries

Thank you! Fixed.

Jeanean

"He focused on Ronin, clashing with him in a blur of motion so forceful that Three leaden balls struck her barrier." The sentence is incomplete.

Akaso Industries

Oh no, this isn't the Demon Core. It's an anathema-enhanced Burster with the Forming Toroid-reinforced shell mentioned earlier. The easiest way to tell that it's not the Demon Core is that I didn't give it very much fanfare and didn't include the ol' multi-line big move descriptor. That's not to say you're wrong about the monster part tho.

Jessy

Would be a while, she said, not ready for it, she thought. Prodigy, She’s not, a monster, she is.


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